Self Evaluation

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

         2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay.                                           It  demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

I think I deserve 1 point yet. After the first draft, I went over my own essay thoroughly and I found out that my writing was a mixup of information, assertation and refutation.

2) What did you do well?
 I think I have put in all that needs to be in the essay.

3) What could you have done better?
I could have arranged the information in an orderly way that the reader understands it easily.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
I think I did the refutation part of the classical argument the best. My topic 'Cartoons do not have a negative effect on the developing brain of children' is practically braking a prejudice so there was a lot to refute.

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?
I think the arguments were quite mixed up and confusing to the reader.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I will rearrange my arguments so they look more convincing and do a little more research